What kind of work do you want to get from the government when you pass your examination? Answer in a
학생이 쓴 원문
I want a work that doesn’t demand a great outcome. It would be better if there are no physical labor to handle and the risk of injury.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Judy!
I am sure that there is a job like this but with a very low pay. ^^ So, the more stressful and demanding the work is, the higher the pay! So choose well and make sure to enjoy that job.
Thank you for these two perfectly made sentences. See you later in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Corect!
It would be better if there are no physical labor to handle and the risk of injury.
>> Correct!
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