What kinds of activities do you enjoy during your favorite season?
학생이 쓴 원문
When the season is winter, I go to ski and spar. Because It is very funny and warm up.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Na [이름]! That sounds fun! Skiing and going to the spa must be a great way to stay active and warm in winter.
~T. Jenna
When the season is winter, I go to ski and spar. Because It is very funny and warm up.
>>In winter, I go skiing and to the spa because it’s really fun and helps me warm up.
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>>My favorite season is winter, and during this time, I go skiing and to the spa because it’s fun and keeps me warm.
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>> I love winter the most, and during this season, I really like skiing and going to the spa because they’re enjoyable, and they keep me cozy.
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