What kinds of contents do you think should be shown more in the Youtube videos?
학생이 쓴 원문
I individually want creators to show me exercise videos. because I`m interested in how to exercise more accurately and effectively.
For example, Whenever doing exercise machine, I seldom feel that it accurately developed specific body parts.
In order to prevent pain i have no choice but to register personnel training. Even though It is definite way to avoid injury, I will need spenditure.
And I hope that when they are making a videos, they have responsibilites for speech,behaviors and contents. I understand attracting more subscribers is impotant to them who make a video. However they have to keep in [이름]d in affecting everything to the childerens.
finally, when i choose videos, I think \"Are the videos making it including accurate information?.\"
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. As audience or watchers, we also have a responsibility to choose what to watch and choose what to believe in everything we see in those videos.
- T. Beth
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>>> I personally want creators to show me exercise videos because I`m interested in how to exercise more accurately and effectively.
For example, Whenever doing exercise machine, I seldom feel that it accurately developed specific body parts.
>>> OR: For example, whenever I\'m using an exercise machine, I seldom feel that it accurately develops specific body parts.
In order to prevent pain i have no choice but to register personnel training.
>>> In order to prevent pain, I have no choice but to hire a personal trainer.
Even though It is definite way to avoid injury, I will need spenditure.
>>> Even though it is a definite way to avoid injury, I will need to spend more.
And I hope that when they are making a videos, they have responsibilites for speech,behaviors and contents.
>>> And I hope that when they are making videos, they take responsibilities on their speech, behavior and contents.
I understand attracting more subscribers is impotant to them who make a video.
>>> I understand that attracting more subscribers is important for those who make videos.
However they have to keep in [이름]d in affecting everything to the childerens.
>>> However, they have to consider everything including influencing children.
finally, when i choose videos, I think \"Are the videos making it including accurate information?.\"
>>> Finally, when I choose videos, I ask myself \"Are the videos showing accurate information?\"
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