What kinds of conversations do you usually enjoy?
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What kinds of conversations do you usually enjoy?
- First, I enjoy talking about delicious food. Because I like to eat delicious food. For example, chicken, macaron, and sweet bread.
-Second, I enjoy talking about entertainer. I like to talk entertainer\'s gossip.
-Third, I like to talk about education. Because my job is elementary school teacher. I always concered about my childeren\'s education.
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What kinds of conversations do you usually enjoy?
- First, I enjoy talking about delicious food.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I like to eat delicious food.
>>> CORRECT!
For example, chicken, macaron, and sweet bread.
>>> CORRECT!
-Second, I enjoy talking about entertainer.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR: I enjoy talking about actors and actresses.
I like to talk entertainer\'s gossip.
>>> I like talking about entertainers\' gossip.
-Third, I like to talk about education.
>>> CORRECT!
Because my job is elementary school teacher.
>>> My job is an elementary school teacher.
I always concered about my childeren\'s education.
>>> I am always concerned about my children\'s education.
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