What kinds of crime are most common in your country? What are the penalties for these crimes?

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Thank you so much for your composition.

It\'s nice to hear that your country dropped one notch in an international corruption awareness.

I hope that my country too. But I think it is impossible.

Anyway, I learned something more about your country.

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Teacher Nina

I have not researched thoroughly, however, I think that violent crimes and property crimes such as violence, assault, theft, fraud, and vandalism make up around four-fifths of all Criminal Code Offences.

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Homicide, the use of drugs, rape, and mugging are a minor.

>> Did you mean:Homicide, use of drugs, rape and mugging are minor.

Firearms are strictly controlled, which makes the country safer.

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Korea is generally a safe country and Seoul is one of the safest large cities in the world.

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Although Korea has a lower crime rate than other countries of comparable economic status, the crime rate has recently been rising.

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>> Although Korea has a lower crime rate than other countries of comparable economic status, the crime rate has recently been increasing.

Korea dropped one notch in an international corruption awareness raking to 46th place among 177 nations in 2013.

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Prostitution is illegal, but the sex trade reached the considerable amount that can’t be simply ignored.

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The penalties for crimes vary depending on what kind of crime it is.

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The capital punishment for a serious crime such as serial murder or a heinous crime is still legal, but Korea has never executed it since around 2000.

>> Did you mean: The capital punishment for a serious crime such as serial murder or a heinous crime is still legal, but Korea has never executed it since 2000.

>> The capital punishment for a serious crime such as serial murder or a heinous crime is still legal, but Korea has never executed around year 2000.