What kinds of dogs do you like and dislike? Do you think dogs are the best pets?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like Pomerian, Golden Retriever. Because Pomerian has cotton candy-like fur and is cute. This is because golden retrievers are mild and day-blind. The dog I hate is a bulldog. But I don\'t hate it too much. It\'s a little scary. I think dogs are the best pets. Because they are not shy as a whole. And I get along with people easily and I am smart. And I think dogs are the best pets because they can help the police or help the blind.
강사 첨삭
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I like Pomerian, Golden Retriever.
>>> I like Pomeranian and Golden Retriever.
Because Pomerian has cotton candy-like fur and is cute.
>>> Because Pomeranian has cotton candy-like fur and is cute.
This is because golden retrievers are mild and day-blind. The dog I hate is a bulldog.
>>> CORRECT!
But I don\'t hate it too much.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s a little scary. I think dogs are the best pets.
>>> CORRECT!
Because they are not shy as a whole.
>>> CORRECT!
And I get along with people easily and I am smart.
>>> CORRECT!
And I think dogs are the best pets because they can help the police or help the blind.
>>> CORRECT!
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