What kinds of drinks do you have with you now?

2020-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I am happy to enjoy drinking coffee. I thought it was fortunate that I could drink coffee even though the anticancer treatment. Coffee is a very big healing for me. Recently I know that diverse and fragrant teas are produced. But still I prefer coffee to tea.

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Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for today\'s ideas!
Have a nice morning and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
What kinds of drinks do you have with you now?
I am happy to enjoy drinking coffee.
>>I enjoy drinking coffee.
I thought it was fortunate that I could drink coffee even though the anticancer treatment.
>>I thought it was fortunate that I could drink coffee since it is also an anticancer treatment.
Coffee is a very big healing for me.
>>Coffee is a very big part of a healing process for me.
Recently I know that diverse and fragrant teas are produced.
>>Recently, I became aware that diverse and fragrant teas are being produced.
But still, I prefer coffee to tea.
CORRECT!
or>>However, I still prefer coffee to tea.

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