What kinds of drinks do you prefer when it\'s hot? Please mention three kinds and tell me how they t
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I often drink iced coffee, strawberry milk and sparkling water when I feel hot.
I think you Know these drinks taste.
So, I introduce Korean traditional drink.
The drink\'s name is Sikhye. It is made by rice and malt.
It is very sweet and delicious.
I attach the its image.
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Hi, Emily! It\'s good that you attached the photo here. It gives me a better idea of how it looks like and it makes me feel like trying it too! Stay safe! -Faith-
I often drink iced coffee, strawberry milk and sparkling water when I feel hot.
>> CORRECT
I think you Know these drinks taste.
I think you Know these drinks taste.
>> I think you know these drinks taste.
So, I introduce Korean traditional drink.
So, I introduce Korean traditional drink.
>> So, I will introduce a Korean traditional drink.
The drink\'s name is Sikhye.
The drink\'s name is Sikhye.
>> The drink name is Sikhye.
It is made by rice and malt.
>> It is made with rice and malt.
It is very sweet and delicious.
It is very sweet and delicious.
>> CORRECT
I attach the its image.
I attach the its image.
>> I attach its image.
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