What kinds of foods do you like eating every summer season? Why?
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What we like to eat in summer, of course, is icecream!!!!!!
It\'s so cold and sweet so I really like that.
When it is so hot, I almost go baskinobbins to eat a pint.
My favorite flavor is World Class Chocolate, Twinberry Cheesecake and Jjontteokgunggap, the flavor may be launched only Korea.
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HI THERE [이름], HAPPY FRIDAY! Thank you so much for you time answering your homework and again I always appreciate it.:-)
Let\'s try to correct your sentences:
What we like to eat in summer, of course, is icecream!!!!!!
>> Of course what we always like to eat in summer is ice cream.
It\'s so cold and sweet so I really like that.
>> It is so cold and sweet so I really like it.
When it is so hot, I almost go baskinobbins to eat a pint.
>> When it is so hot, I always go to eat baskin robbins.
My favorite flavor is World Class Chocolate, Twin berry Cheesecake and Jjontteokgunggap
>> My favorite flavor is a World Class Chocolate like Twin berry Cheesecake and Jjontteokgunggap.
the flavor may be launched only Korea.
>> The flavor may be launched only in Korea.
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