What kinds of gifts do you like to get?
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Hello Mo!
I understand that English could be really difficult…
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it..
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
i want to get kinds of money .
>> I want to receive gifts in the form of money.
for example, check or paper money, not a coin zz
>> I would prefer to receive a check or money in cash, rather than coins.
because i don\'t have lots of money now.
>> This is because I don\'t have a lot of money now.
I\'ve spent my money to eat, clothes, etc..
>> I\'ve spent my money on food, clothes, etc.
my pay day is too far...for me...to come
>> and for me, my pay day is still far and it\'s taking so long to come.
\'20, october\' is my pay day.
>> My next pay day is on the 20th of October.
from that day to now, I have been enduring hungry.
>> From today until my next pay day, I will endure feeling hungry.
that\'s why I want to get gift that like money...
>> That is why I want to receive money as a gift.
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