What kinds of gifts do you like to give?

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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I like to give people some food. Sometimes I made the food and Sometimes I just buy it. I prefer to give people sweeties as they make people\'s feeling better. Cookies, cakes and macaroons…. They are delicious and beautiful. But people need to take care of if recipients have allergy to specific kind of foods. And there are some people who don\'t like sweet desert. However, it is one of the best gift for friends if giver choose it carefully.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Happy Monday :)

Thank you for always doing your homework:)


T. Lainey <\",)))><



I like to give people some food. Sometimes I made the food and Sometimes I just buy it.

>>> I like to give people food. Sometimes, I make the food and sometimes I just buy it.


 I prefer to give people sweeties as they make people\'s feeling better.

>>> I prefer to give people sweets as they make people\'s feeling better.


 Cookies, cakes and macaroons…. They are delicious and beautiful.

>>> correct


 But people need to take care of if recipients have allergy to specific kind of foods.

>>>  But also people need to be careful in giving foods because some might be allergic to certain kind of foods.


 And there are some people who don\'t like sweet desert.

>>> And some people don\'t like sweet deserts.


 However, it is one of the best gift for friends if giver choose it carefully.

>>> However, it is one of the best gifts for friends if given you have to be careful  who to give it to.

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