What kinds of gifts do you like to give? Answer in 5 to 10 sentences.

2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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I usually give my friends flowers. Flower is a nice gift in almost every occasions. Party, birthday, graduation, concert, etc. There\'s a variety of flowers like rose, sunflower, lily, mum and so on. And we can combine different kinds of flowers, so the option is very wide. Dry flower becomes trendy in Korea, because it\'s preservability and special mood. Last year I gave many flowers to my companion who are from same university for their graduation. When I buy flowers for a buddy, I take account of the character of the mate. For example, In the case the friends is very delicate and calm, I generally choose light and pale color of flower. When the fellow is full of confidence and very direct, I pick a one big striking flower. If you think flower is not enough to show your closeness, you can also add your thoughtful letter with them. Flower is the most perfect gift.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Great work :)))


T. Lainey <\",)))><



I usually give my friends flowers.

>>> correct


 Flower is a nice gift in almost every occasions. Party, birthday, graduation, concert, etc.

>>> correct


 There\'s a variety of flowers like rose, sunflower, lily, mum and so on.

>>> correct


 And we can combine different kinds of flowers, so the option is very wide.

>>> correct


Dry flower becomes trendy in Korea, because it\'s preservability and special mood.

>>> Dry flowers is now in trend here in Korea because we can preserve them for special mood.


 Last year I gave many flowers to my companion who are from same university for their graduation.

>>> Last year, I gave flowers to some of my friends who are from the same university for graduation.


 When I buy flowers for a buddy, I take account of the character of the mate.

>>> correct


 For example, In the case the friends is very delicate and calm, I generally choose light and pale color of flower.

>>> For example, I have a friend who is very delicate and calm, then I choose flower suited for her and I usually choose light and pale color of flowers.


 When the fellow is full of confidence and very direct, I pick a one big striking flower.

>>> When the fellow is full of confidence and very direct, I pick  a big striking flower.


 If you think flower is not enough to show your closeness, you can also add your thoughtful letter with them.

>>> correct


 Flower is the most perfect gift.

>>> correct

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