What kinds of jobs interest you most and least?

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Personally, I am satisfied with my occupation which is a nurse.

>> Personally, I am satisfied with my occupation as a nurse.

It is probably related to my carrier. 

>> It is probably related to my career. 

What I mean is that I am working as a nurse for over 18 years, and I got used to it.

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As far as I know, nursing has a lot of benefits. 

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Firstly, there are many departments to work. 

>> Firstly, there are many departments where I can work. 

I\'ve been doing in hemodialysis department for 8 years now. 

>> I\'ve been working in hemodialysis department for 8 years now. 

In this part, working hours tend to be more flexible and shorter than others, so it is pretty suitable for working moms. 

>> In this department, working hours tend to be more flexible and shorter than the other departments, so it is pretty suitable for working moms. 

Apart from that, they can give a challenge to work abroad as an international nurse if they have ambition.

>> Apart from that, it can give them a chance to work abroad as an international nurse if they have that ambition.

When it comes to not interesting jobs, I am not interested in officers. 

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For me, it is quite boring, and operating about documents or ordering is challenging.

>> For me, it is quite boring, and operating with documents or ordering is challenging.