What kinds of jobs interest you most and least?

2024-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

학생이 쓴 원문

I am interested in a carpenter. When I am watching woodworking on YouTube, I can relax. I know it\'s harder than it looks. And, I don\'t have good manual dexterity. If I try many times, I am sure that I will get used it. I hate working without progress. When I do an interminable task, I am going to be crazy. When I start tasks, I should know that the goal of the tasks, and what can I get from the tasks. If it\'s impossible, I never start it.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]ny!

Oh. Well, that\'s important but you can also see the results of your hard work. Small achievements are still achievements, right?

~ Trixia

Content:

I am interested in a carpenter.

- I am interested in carpenters.

When I am watching woodworking on YouTube, I can relax.

- CORRECT.

I know it\'s harder than it looks.

- CORRECT.

And, I don\'t have good manual dexterity.

- And I don\'t have good manual dexterity.

If I try many times, I am sure that I will get used it.

- If I try it many times, I am sure that I will get used to it.

I hate working without progress.

- CORRECT.

When I do an interminable task, I am going to be crazy.

- CORRECT.

When I start tasks, I should know that the goal of the tasks, and what can I get from the tasks.

- When I start tasks, I should know the goal of the tasks and what I can get from them.

If it\'s impossible, I never start it.

- CORRECT.

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