What kinds of things do you buy online? What would you rather buy in person?
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These days, I buy something in a online more than offline.
Because industrial goods I\'ve experienced in the past has same quality, so I don\'t need see in a offline.
Nevertheless I still buy something like a food, beverage in a offline.
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Hi [이름]! Many people prefer online shopping these days because it is more convenient.
~Kelly^^
These days, I buy something in a online more than offline.>> These days, I buy something online more than offline.
Because industrial goods I\'ve experienced in the past has same quality, so I don\'t need see in a offline.
>> Because I\'ve already experienced shopping for industrial goods in the past and they have the same quality, I don\'t need to see or check them offline.
Nevertheless I still buy something like a food, beverage in a offline.
Nevertheless I still buy something like a food, beverage in a offline.
>> Nevertheless, I still buy some food and beverage offline.
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