What Korean culture or tradition would you like to continue to the next generation? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many Korean tradition disappered last few decades.
However I think that some traditional holiday should keep such as Seol-nal, Chu-Suk.
These holidays are meaningful for Korean and these have effect gathering familiy.
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Many Korean tradition disappered last few decades.
>> Many Korean traditions have disappeared over the last few decades.
However I think that some traditional holiday should keep such as Seol-nal, Chu-Suk.
>> However, I think that some traditional holidays, such as Seollal and Chuseok, should be preserved.
These holidays are meaningful for Korean and these have effect gathering familiy.
>> These holidays are meaningful to Koreans and help bring families together.
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