What Korean policy/law do you think should be removed?

2021-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think should be removed korean law that if criminal drink alcoholic reduce sentence. because I don’t understand why reduced sentence what criminal don’t control yourself.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

That\'s true! There\'s actually a saying that \"You should drink responsibly\". People should not drink too much and use it as an excuse when they commit crimes. I hope this law will be removed as well.

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I think should be removed korean law that if criminal drink alcoholic reduce sentence.

>> I think the rule about reducing the sentence of drunk criminals should be removed.

because I don’t understand why reduced sentence what criminal don’t control yourself.

>> It\'s because I don\'t know why it should be reduces since they are the ones who can\'t control themselves.

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