What lessons can humans learn from the cycle of the seasons?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the cycle is important to human.because natinal cycle is important to the people.
The water cycle,air cycle it is.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your third revised composition from the past few weeks of homework. I appreciate your sending it. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
What lessons can humans learn from the cycle of the seasons?
I think the cycle is important to human.because natinal cycle is important to the people.
>>> I think the cycle of the seasons is important to humans, because natural cycles are essential for people.
The water cycle,air cycle it is.v
>>> Examples include the water cycle and the air cycle.
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