What level do you want to reach in your career? Please give details in the next class.

2019-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I am working as a radiation therapist at hospital. My main role is delivering radiation to cancer patients for treatment or reducing pain purposes. I do general examination by using CT machine and do treatment planning with the dedicated computer. However, I can\'t carry out quality assurance check because of my qualification. If I have a license or certificate of physicist who in charge of QA and research, I can be a responsible person of it. There are so many problem to be a medical physicist in Korea. Our country doesn\'t have license on this job by the law, so nobody is not qualified as a medical physicist by the law. As I know, people have a master degree on this field are able to work as a medical physicist but they are not still qualified by the law. It can be a chance for me to be a medical physicist because we don\'t have exact license system yet.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름],

Thank you for today’s homework!

Have a great day then and talk to you next time!

Teacher ELLY.

What level do you want to reach in your career? Please give details in the next class.

I am working as a radiation therapist at hospital.

>>I am working as a radiation therapist at the hospital.

or>>I work at the hospital as a radiation therapist.

My main role is delivering radiation to cancer patients for treatment or reducing pain purposes.

>>My main role is to treat the cancer patients using radiation therapy to reduce their pain.

I do general examination by using CT machine and do treatment planning with the dedicated computer.

>>I do a general examination by using the CT machine and create a treatment plan using a dedicated computer.

However, I can\'t carry out quality assurance check because of my qualification.

>>However, I can\'t carry out a quality assurance check because of my qualification.

If I have a license or certificate of physicist who in charge of QA and research, I can be a responsible person of it.

>>If I have a license or a certificate of a physicist, who can be in charge of the QA and research, then I can take this role.

There are so many problem to be a medical physicist in Korea.

>>There are so many problems for a medical physicist in Korea.

Our country doesn\'t have license on this job by the law, so nobody is not qualified as a medical physicist by the law.

>>Our country doesn\'t give a license for this job legally, so nobody is qualified as a medical physicist under the law.

As I know, people have a master degree on this field are able to work as a medical physicist but they are not still qualified by the law.

>>As far as I know, people have a master’s degree on this field, who are able to work as a medical physicist, but they are not still qualified under the law.

It can be a chance for me to be a medical physicist because we don\'t have exact license system yet.

>>I can still get a chance to be a medical physicist because we don\'t have an exact licensure system yet.

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