What life-changing moments have you had in your life?
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Well, I\'d love to talk about my story. When I worked as solider, I wasn\'t pretty sure what I will do after military service. But it got me motivated from my older sister that she gave me a ride in a small plane, it\'s called Cessna 172. It reminded me of that was the very moment when I was boarding to that, I felt like my own plane was flying , not only I was wondering how to fly an airplane and run an engine, but also I want to do maintenance too. So I did happen upon finding a passion that created a seed and bloomed. Ever [이름]ce that, I started to become a mechanic of aircraft. See? I would have to say that\'s my turning point.
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Fantastic Tuesday, Elic! Never give up trying. If you make mistakes, it’s okay because we all do. Making mistakes is a great way to learn.
Well, I\'d love to talk about my story. When I worked as solider, I wasn\'t pretty sure what I will do after military service. But it got me motivated from my older sister that she gave me a ride in a small plane, it\'s called Cessna 172.
>> Well, I\'d love to talk about my personal story. After serving the military, I don\'t have any idea on what to do until my sister gave me a ride in a small plane called Cessna 172 then I got really motivated.
It reminded me of that was the very moment when I was boarding to that, I felt like my own plane was flying , not only I was wondering how to fly an airplane and run an engine, but also I want to do maintenance too.
>> It felt like I was driving my own plane. [이름]ce that day, I was already imagining how to fly an airplane, run an engine, and also do aircraft maintenance too.
So I did happen upon finding a passion that created a seed and bloomed. Ever [이름]ce that, I started to become a mechanic of aircraft. See? I would have to say that\'s my turning point.
>> It\'s like a planted seed that bloomed into a beautiful flower. Ever [이름]ce that day, I started dreaming of becoming an Aircraft mechanic. See? That\'s the most important turning point in my life.
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