What life lessons did you learn the hard way?
학생이 쓴 원문
The lesson that I personally learned the hard way is definitely that being honest is the best way to solve the difficult problem. We might get into trouble along the way in our life by doing something wrong or making mistakes. In order to avoid the difficult situation or get out of trouble, we can easily think of making excuses and telling lies. Deceiving yourself and others seems to be working for a while or at the first place, however, it can only make things worse. Once we tell a small lie, you might have to tell bigger lies to cover it. Unfortunately, early in our life we learn that dishonesty can have incredible short-term benefits. It can get us what we want. It can make it easier to please the people around us. Honest people trust themselves. Never underestimate the life-changing power of the ability to trust yourself. Pretending to be something you are not requires constant attention to detail, even for the most experienced. Honest people are better able to relax.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Sir [이름]!
How was your day?Did you finish your tasks early? I hope you did. You are right. Sometimes being honest is difficult.
It might lead to some problems but at least you have a peace of mind.
Telling lies is not good. It can ruin relatiionships.
We have to be true to ourselves and others as well.
Thanks for your perfect composition.See you in class.
Teacher Nina
The lesson that I personally learned the hard way is definitely that being honest is the best way to solve the difficult problem.
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>> OR: The lesson that I personally learned the hard way is being honest is the best way to solve the difficult problem.
We might get into trouble along the way in our life by doing something wrong or making mistakes.
>> correct
In order to avoid the difficult situation or get out of trouble, we can easily think of making excuses and telling lies.
>> correct
Deceiving yourself and others seems to be working for a while or at the first place, however, it can only make things worse.
>> correct
Once we tell a small lie, you might have to tell bigger lies to cover it.
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Unfortunately, early in our life we learn that dishonesty can have incredible short-term benefits.
>> correct
It can get us what we want.
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It can make it easier to please the people around us.
>> correct
Honest people trust themselves.
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Never underestimate the life-changing power of the ability to trust yourself.
>> correct
Pretending to be something you are not requires constant attention to detail, even for the most experienced.
>> correct
Honest people are better able to relax.
>> correct
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