What made you decide to stay in Korea instead of living in another country? (aside from the reason b
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What made I decided to stay in Korea instead of living in another country? (aside from the reason because Im [Name])
well, Because, I can make a money because I have a job in Korea and have a house so I can save money without paying rent.
In addition, it is a big advantage to go to the clinic comfortably even when the korea medical system is so good.
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What made I decided to stay in Korea instead of living in another country? (aside from the reason because Im [Name])
>> What made me decide to stay in Korea instead of living in another county?
well, Because, I can make a money because I have a job in Korea and have a house so I can save money without paying rent.
>> Well, it is because I have a job in Korea and a house to live in without paying rent. I can also save money because of that.
In addition, it is a big advantage to go to the clinic comfortably even when the korea medical system is so good.
>> In addition, I can go to the clinic comfortably because I know that Korean medical system is good.
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