What made you smile today?
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I was busy. After arriving to the university, I checked e-mail first of all because I had to confirm whether my professor sent me e-mail or not. Originally, he said that he would send e-mail to me tomorrow, but he sent it today. So, I had to deal with a work related my project.
If I had just worked today, I would have not laughed at all. But seminal regarding on money was held today afternoon. Fortunately, it was very interesting. The main contents of lecture was how to manage our money and what types financial instruments we should invest in. Although I was not familiar with the contents of the seminar, lecturer gave a lecture pleasantly and it was very useful. The reason why I could laugh during the lecture is that he told a joke such as he thinks that he is more handsome than a star. Thanks to the lecture, I could not only laugh a lot, but also gain helpful knowledge. I hope that such a interesting seminar will be held one more time after starting the semester.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday Miss [이름]!
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful and knowledgeable experience. We should always grab every opportunity to learn something and to be happy. Smile always!!^^
~Kelly^^
Today, I was busy.
>> Correct.
After arriving to the university, I checked e-mail first of all because I had to confirm whether my professor sent me e-mail or not.
>> After arriving to the university, I checked e-mail before anything else because I had to confirm whether my professor sent me an e-mail or not.
Originally, he said that he would send e-mail to me tomorrow, but he sent it today.
>> He told me that he would send an e-mail tomorrow, but he sent it today.
So, I had to deal with a work related my project.
>> So I had to do a work related to my project.If I had just worked today, I would have not laughed at all.
>> Correct.
But seminal regarding on money was held today afternoon.
>> But a seminar regarding money was held this afternoon.
Fortunately, it was very interesting.
>> Correct.
The main contents of lecture was how to manage our money and what types financial instruments we should invest in.
>> The main content of the ure was how to manage our money and what types of ancial instruments we should invest in.
Although I was not familiar with the contents of the seminar, lecturer gave a lecture pleasantly and it was very useful.
>> Although I was not familiar with the contents of the seminar, the lecturer gave the talk pleasantly and it was very useful.
The reason why I could laugh during the lecture is that he told a joke such as he thinks that he is more handsome than a star.
>> The reason why I could laugh during the lecture wabecause he shared a joke about someone who is more handsome than a star.
Thanks to the lecture, I could not only laugh a lot, but also gain helpful knowledge.
>> Thanks to the lecture, I did not only laugh, but I also gained helpful knowledge/information.
I hope that such a interesting seminar will be held one more time after starting the semester.
>> I hope that such interesting seminar will be held one more time after starting the semester.
>> I hope that another interesting seminar will be conducted after the start of the semester.
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