What major challenges and problems did you face? How did you handle them?

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We used to have many authorized service centers that were contracted independent repairers.

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Due to the change of company’s policy in the aim of stablishing healthy service network, we had to terminate the service contract with them.

>> Better: Due to the change of company’s policy in the aim of establishing healthy service network, we had to terminate the service contract with them.

Our internal legal counsel have reviewed the contract and made comments that we could terminate the contract, but there was a possibility that they could take the case to the Fair Trading Authority claiming that their business rights were infringed and deprived of. 

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My job was to resolve the issue as quietly and at low cost as possible.

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It was really a tough job because they have fiercely resisted our move. 

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Before sending an official termination letter, I have thought a lot on how I could persuade them. 

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Although I’ve prepared a lot of data on why they should be closed, I finally thought the data won’t help.

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The best way would be talk to them in person.

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So I visited each of them and asked for their understanding in an honest and humble manner.

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>> OR: So I visited each one of them and asked for their understanding in an honest and humble manner.