What major change would you like to make to your ?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to change in my personality that I have angre.
It\'s becasue I dont like angre.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
You tried out many patterns here.
Keep doing that because it\'s really good practice.
I taught you some new words today.
Try to remember and always use those expressions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to change in my personality that I have angre.
>> I want to change my personality of having a bad temper.
It\'s becasue I dont like angre.
It\'s becasue I dont like angre.
>> It\'s because I don\'t like being angry.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.