what make me

Thank you so much for sharing you childhood story. 

I love what you\'ve written in the end about beco[이름]g a Christian. 

Continue to light for Christ. 

I\'m looking forward to our next classes, Mrs. [Name].

I highly appreciate your effort in improving. 

~Teacher Eve.    

when I was the childhood I grew up with the bad environment 

>> During my childhood, I grew up with a bad environment.
at that time most people were being poor

>> At that time, most people were poor.
 anyway we were not rich and my parents had not been familiar

>> Correct!
 sometimes I had climbed up I could see a lot grave  

>> Sometimes when I climb up, I could see a lot of grave.
 since then it made me think what is the death 

>> Since then, it made me think about death.
as I beco[이름]g christian I knew the answer

>> When I became a Christian, I know the answer now.