What make you happy and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Traveling makes me happy because I like to try a new food culture and I like the history and traditions of other countries.
I play golf makes me happy
It feel good to walk on the field.
강사 첨삭
Exciting Monday to you, Kay! I hope all is well with you today. Great things are done by a series of small things brought together, so let\'s help each other and reach for our dreams.
Traveling makes me happy because I like to try a new food culture and I like the history and traditions of other countries.
>> CORRECT
I play golf makes me happy
>> Playing golf makes me happy.
It feel good to walk on the field.
>> It feels good to walk around the park.
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