What makes a conversation with a stranger great?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like having conversation with a stranger because of two reasons.
First of all, I can learn more about the world through a person. Every person has different backgrounds and experiences that shape the way of thinking and the attitude toward life. Although I have limited experiences, I can learn from others and become more open-minded.
Secondly, there are chances that a stranger has the same interests with me. I am very glad if I find someone who likes the books or places I like, or someone who studies a similar subject with mine. It\'s more exciting to share the interests with others than just enjoying alone.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
Thank you for doing your homework despite your busy schedule! You are a very diligent student. ^ ^
-Rachel
I like having conversation with a stranger because of two reasons.
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>> I enjoy having conversations with strangers for two reasons.
First of all, I can learn more about the world through a person. Every person has different backgrounds and experiences that shape the way of thinking and the attitude toward life.
First of all, I can learn more about the world through a person. Every person has different backgrounds and experiences that shape the way of thinking and the attitude toward life.
>> First of all, I can learn more about the world through a person. Every person has different backgrounds and experiences that shape their way of thinking and attitude toward life.
Although I have limited experiences, I can learn from others and become more open-minded.
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>> Despite my limitations, I can learn from others and be more open-minded.
Secondly, there are chances that a stranger has the same interests with me.
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>> Secondly, there is a higher possibility that a stranger shares similar interests with me.
I am very glad if I find someone who likes the books or places I like, or someone who studies a similar subject with mine.
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>> It would be a delight if I encounter someone who likes books or places, or someone who studies the same subject that I do.
It\'s more exciting to share the interests with others than just enjoying alone.
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