What makes a good first date in your opinion?

2017-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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In my opinion, A Good attitude makes a good first date. And in my experience, When a man who is dating with me is attentive and have a good manner, I like that date. Moreover, it is not for a date. For instance, I am more happy and amused ,when I talk with my friends who is a good listener and good at reacting than who is not. So it is applied for all situation that have conversation with people. And another thing is having a nice meal. I think most of women like to eat delicious food. In addition when people eat it, they are delighted. And I can think like this he looking for a nice restaurant for me. Finally, same hobby can make a good first date. if we have same hobby, then we can easily have a long conversation and enjoy it together. And I think that could be a great time.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Kim!

Thank you for sharing your opinion about a good first date. My goal for a first date is for both of us to enjoy ourselves, and for us to get to know each other better. Anyway, have a good day and enjoy your future date!^^

~Kelly^^

In my opinion, A Good attitude makes a good first date.

>> In my opinion, a good attitude makes a good first date.
And in my experience, When a man who is dating with me is attentive and have a good manner, I like that date.

>> And in my experience, I like to date when a man is attentive and has good manners.

Moreover, it is not for a date.

>> Moreover, it is not only for a date.

For instance, I am more happy and amused ,when I talk with my friends who is a good listener and good at reacting than who is not.

>> For instance, I am more happy and amused when I talk with my friends who are good listeners and who are good at giving a feedback than those who are not.

So it is applied for all situation that have conversation with people.
>> So, it is applied having a conversation with people.
And another thing is having a nice meal. 

>> Correct.
I think most of women like to eat delicious food.

>> I think, most women like to eat delicious food.

In addition when people eat it, they are delighted.

>> In addition. when people eat, they are delighted.

And I can think like this he looking for a nice restaurant for me. 

>> So, it gives me the impression that he looks for a restaurant for me.
Finally, same hobby can make a good first date.

>> Finally, having the same hobby can make a good first date.

if we have same hobby, then we can easily have a long conversation and enjoy it together.

>> If we have the same hobby, we can easily have a long conversation and enjoy it together.

And I think that could be a great time.

>> And I think that we could be a great time.

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