What makes a good parent? Do you think parenting has changed throughout the ages?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think good parenting can begin with understanding children. I mean customized parenting should be needed to grow the children well because all children are unique, and different from each other so we can’t educate all children with a way of education. Although the overall orientation of education is the same, the education of each child needs to be fine-tuned little by little. In this respect, education for one child needs to change throughout his age. when he or she is young, you need to focus on letting him or her know the love from those around including family. However, if the child is old enough to judge for himself or herself, parents need to help the child stand on his or her own feet, not relying on parents. Likewise, parenting should be upgraded and improved according to the change in the child’s condition until the child leaves his or her parents.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Steve! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think good parenting can begin with understanding children.
>>> CORRECT!
I mean customized parenting should be needed to grow the children well because all children are unique, and different from each other so we can’t educate all children with a way of education.
>>> CORRECT!
Although the overall orientation of education is the same, the education of each child needs to be fine-tuned little by little.
>>> CORRECT!
In this respect, education for one child needs to change throughout his age. when he or she is young, you need to focus on letting him or her know the love from those around including family.
>>> CORRECT!
However, if the child is old enough to judge for himself or herself, parents need to help the child stand on his or her own feet, not relying on parents.
>>> CORRECT!
Likewise, parenting should be upgraded and improved according to the change in the child’s condition until the child leaves his or her parents.
>>> CORRECT!
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