What makes a movie a great movie?

2019-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think, there are two essential things in a good movie. First, one themes to criticize is needed. I think good movie is the movie which has the lingering feelings. And to make people reconsider the movie, the message is critical. How the movie is fun and stimulate people\'s emotion, it can\'t make people to reconsider the movie without the message! Second, acting ability of the actors/actress is also very important. Sometimes, good acting makes me experience a thrill. Also, it makes the audience to focus on the story line. If the acting is terrible, people can\'t enjoy the movie well. It could ruin all the movie. I think remain things are like additives which makes movie more plentiful, excluding the two things. For example, good OST and visual effects so on. Of course I know that there are many different opinions And these all conditions are just my private preference.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks again for this. I do agree with you on those points. In my case, I consider the story line first when deciding to watch a movie.

- T. Beth
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I think, there are two essential things in a good movie.

>>> correct
First, one themes to criticize is needed.

>>> OR: First, criticizing the theme is needed.

I think good movie is the movie which has the lingering feelings.

>>> I think a good movie is one which gives a lingering feeling.

And to make people reconsider the movie, the message is critical.

>>> correct

>>> OR: And to recommend the movie to others, you should sound convincing.

How the movie is fun and stimulate people\'s emotion, it can\'t make people to reconsider the movie without the message!

>>> correct
Second, acting ability of the actors/actress is also very important.

>>> correct

Sometimes, good acting makes me experience a thrill.

>>> correct

Also, it makes the audience to focus on the story line.

>>> OR: It also makes the audience focus on the story line.

If the acting is terrible, people can\'t enjoy the movie well.

>>> correct

It could ruin all the movie.
>>> correct
I think remain things are like additives which makes movie more plentiful, excluding the two things.

>>> I think the rest are like additives which make the movie more plentiful, excluding the two things.

For example, good OST and visual effects so on.

>>> For example, a good OST, impressive visual effects and so on.

Of course I know that there are many different opinions And these all conditions are just my private preference.

>>> Of course, I know that there are many different opinions and all these conditions are just my private preferences.

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