What makes a pleasant shopping experience?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my pleasant shopping consists of three elements.
First, I am happy when I feel respected as a customer. I don\'t want to be over clerks. I just want a kind response.
Second, I want a reasonable price or bargain for my shopping. when I feel overcharged in some items, I don\'t want to visit that more once again.
Third, I want good quality especially for fresh products, such as dairy products, vegetables, or fruits.
If all three parts meet, my shopping can be a pleasant experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Steve! The overall content of
your work is comprehensible. Your answer is remarkable. Keep it up!
- Debbie
>> I think a pleasant shopping experience consists of three elements: respect, reasonable price and good quality.
First, I am happy when I feel respected as a customer.
>> First, I am happy when I feel respected as a customer.
I don\'t want to be over clerks.
>> What do you mean?
I just want a kind response.
>> This is a good sentence.
Second, I want a reasonable price or bargain for my shopping.
>> Second, I want a reasonable price or bargain.
when I feel overcharged in some items, I don\'t want to visit that more once again.
>> When I feel I have been overcharged for some items, I will not visit that store again.
Third, I want good quality especially for fresh products, such as dairy products, vegetables, or fruits.
>> Third, I want good quality, especially for fresh products, such as dairy products, vegetables, or fruits
If all three parts meet, my shopping can be a pleasant experience.
If all three parts meet, my shopping can be a pleasant experience.
>> If all three elements are present, it\'s a pleasant shopping experience for me.
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