What makes friends different from family?
학생이 쓴 원문
friends are different what we are sharing about talking.
of course we can share our story to our parents.
but friends empathize better than parents.
because we experience lots of thing at the same age.
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friends are different what we are sharing about talking.
>> We share differently when we are talking to our friends.
of course we can share our story to our parents.
>> CORRECT!
OR: >> Of course, we can share our story to our parents.
but friends empathize better than parents.
>> CORRECT!
OR: >> Friends empathize better than parents.
because we experience lots of thing at the same age.
>> We experience many things which are the same because we have similar ages.
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