What makes home special to you?

Hello, Sally, I write a note for the first time after the teacher was changed. At first, the lesson is easy to me. But, lately the lesson is difficult to me. It is likely that I have a difficulty in hearing. So I want you to use a chatting when a new word appear or the word that I don't understad appear. My Toeic score is 525. I am a beginner!! < composition > -------------------------------------------------------------------- My family makes my home special to me. I thank my family. I value the time with family. It is because the family is important to me in my life.

 Hello pretty Sophie! Thank you for sending me a composition. It's nice to hear your thoughts and opinions about your TOIEC score. Congratulations! Good job! Keep it up! Anyway, here are some corrections. Kindly review them. Have a wonderful night! Take care always! =Teacher Sally=   Hello, Sally,>> Hello, Sally.I write a note for the first time after the teacher was changed.>> I am  writing a note for the first time after my teacher was changed.At first, the lesson is easy to me. But, lately the lesson is difficult to me. >> At first, the lesson was easy  for me but lately it became difficult. It is likely that I have a difficulty in hearing. >> It is likely that I have a difficulty in listening.So I want you to use a chatting when a new word appear or the word that I don't understad appear.>> So I want to ask you to send new words that would appear or those that I don't understand through chat.My Toeic score is 525. I am a beginner!! >> Correct >> OR By the way, I got a score of 525 in TOIEC and I am just a beginner.< composition > >> This Is my composition.--------------------------------------------------------------------My family makes my home special to me. >> Correct I thank my family. >> Correct >>OR I thank my family for it.  I value the time with family. >> Correct It is because the family is important to me in my life. >> It is because my family is important to me and in my life.