What makes it difficult to apply for a job?
학생이 쓴 원문
Definitely, it\'s making a resume to get me difficult about applying for a job. Because a question of style depends on the company. So, I need to make resumes a lot. Also, the more I\'m stressed the more I make many resumes. While making it , it needs to review the past what I\'ve been through. There were the education, experience, and training that I learned. It\'s pretty hard to find something what I learned during that period.
강사 첨삭
Thank you, Eric! ^^ It is really hard to apply for jobs especially if the company\'s reference doesn\'t fit our qualifications. But I know it is all worth it once you passed the job interview and start working. Fighting! ~ T.Gelly
Definitely, it\'s making a resume to get me difficult about applying for a job.
>> Definitely making a resume is the thing that makes my application difficult in finding a job.
Because a question of style depends on the company.
>> Because the style of questions depends on the company.
So, I need to make resumes a lot.
>> So, I need to make a lot of resumes.
Also, the more I\'m stressed the more I make many resumes.
>> Also, the more I get stressed, the more I make tons of resumes.
While making it , it needs to review the past what I\'ve been through.
>> While making them, I need to review the past and what I\'ve been through.
There were the education, experience, and training that I learned.
>> They were the education, experience, and training that I had.
It\'s pretty hard to find something what I learned during that period.
>> It\'s pretty hard to find something that I learned during that period.
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