What makes junk food unhealthy, and why do so many people prefer it over healthy food?
학생이 쓴 원문
Junk food is more stimulated than healthy food.
It is more sweet, salty and spicy.
That\'s the reason why people are looking for junk food more.
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Junk food is more stimulated than healthy food.
>> Junk food is more stimulating than healthy food.
It is more sweet, salty and spicy.
>> It is often sweeter, saltier, and spicier.
That\'s the reason why people are looking for junk food more.
>> That is why people tend to prefer junk food more.
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