What makes me feel better?
학생이 쓴 원문
I sometimes be tired and feeling down.
So, I should make myself feel better.
If I\'m feeling down, I make myself feel better to buy what I wanted to get or I just lying down.
Buy something makes me happy and makes me feel better.
However, I try to buy less.
Also, when I lying down, I don\'t think anymore.
So, I can be normal person and do my work again.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia, here are the corrections on your homework! Well done on your output, and I hope this helps.
I sometimes be tired and feeling down.
>>> I sometimes get tired and feel down.
So, I should make myself feel better.
So, I should make myself feel better.
>>> CORRECT!
If I\'m feeling down, I make myself feel better to buy what I wanted to get or I just lying down.
>>> If I\'m feeling down, I make myself feel better by buying what I wanted or just lying down.
Buy something makes me happy and makes me feel better.
Buy something makes me happy and makes me feel better.
>>> Buying something makes me happy and helps me feel better.
However, I try to buy less.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, when I lying down, I don\'t think anymore.
Also, when I lying down, I don\'t think anymore.
>>> Also, when I lie down, I don\'t think anymore.
So, I can be normal person and do my work again.
>>> So, I can be a normal person and do my work again.
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