What makes me happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [Writing Task] What makes you happy? Make a short essay about this.
I like playing Legos and making Legos.
I have many Legos in my house.
Playing Legos makes me happy.
I like reading books and writing books and daydreaming.
Daydreaming about my book makes me happy.
Many other things makes me happy.
I am happy person! : )
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework!
You did well with your written homework. I got to know you more. :)
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
I like playing Legos and making Legos.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I like playing and making legos.
I have many Legos in my house.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have a lot of legos in my house.
Playing Legos makes me happy.
>>CORRECT
I like reading books and writing books and daydreaming.
>>I like reading books, writing books, and daydreaming.
Daydreaming about my book makes me happy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Imagining about my book makes me happy.
Many other things makes me happy.
>>Many other things make me happy.
I am happy person! : )
>>I am a happy person.
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