What makes me happy.
학생이 쓴 원문
My friends make me happy. When I converse with my friends I can forget my troubles. Also I can reduce loneliness by them. Sometimes I go on a trip with them. Watching nice view and eating delicious food with them makes me happy too.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julia! It is so nice to know about your friends and the things that make you happy. Thanks for sharing then. keep safe and See you soon!:)
~T. Annie
My friends make me happy.
>>Correct!
When I converse with my friends I can forget my troubles.
>>When I converse with my friends, I can forget about my troubles.
Also I can reduce loneliness by them.
>>Also, I can reduce loneliness by being with them.
Sometimes I go on a trip with them.
>>Sometimes, I go on a trip with them.
Watching nice view and eating delicious food with them makes me happy too.
>>Looking at a nice view and eating delicious food with them makes me happy too.
Sometimes on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always More (Definitions, Synonyms, Translation) See perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight More (Definitions, Synonyms, Translation)
~T. Annie
My friends make me happy.
>>Correct!
When I converse with my friends I can forget my troubles.
>>When I converse with my friends, I can forget about my troubles.
Also I can reduce loneliness by them.
>>Also, I can reduce loneliness by being with them.
Sometimes I go on a trip with them.
>>Sometimes, I go on a trip with them.
Watching nice view and eating delicious food with them makes me happy too.
>>Looking at a nice view and eating delicious food with them makes me happy too.
Sometimes on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always More (Definitions, Synonyms, Translation) See perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight More (Definitions, Synonyms, Translation)
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