What makes me happy.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, when my mom compliments me, I will be happy.
Second, when I play a board game with my mom, I will be happy.
Third, when I have a good report on the test, I will be happy.
Lastly, when I play video games, I will be happy.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for this composition.
Please check the corrections~
Have a good day! ^^
- T. Rina
1. First, when my mom compliments me, I will be happy.
>> Firstly, I feel happy whenever my mom compliments me.
>> Firstly, I feel happy whenever my mom compliments me.
2. Second, when I play a board game with my mom, I will be happy.
>> Secondly, I also feel happy when I play a board game with my mom.
>> Secondly, I also feel happy when I play a board game with my mom.
3. Third, when I have a good report on the test, I will be happy.
>> Thirdly, getting a good report on the test makes me happy too.
>> Thirdly, getting a good report on the test makes me happy too.
4. Lastly, when I play video games, I will be happy.
>> Lastly, playing video games makes me happy.
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