What makes me happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
Firstly, I\'m really happy when I eat what I want to eat like chicken, pizza, and pork rice soup. I love eating and eating is the most joy in my life. Secondly, when my mom gives me a hug, I feel happy because I love my mom. Lastly, playing computer game also makes me happy because it is very fun.
강사 첨삭
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Happy Monday! You did well on the answer of your homework and I am impressed ^^ See you in our class.
T. DON
HOMEWORK:
Firstly, I\'m really happy when I eat what I want to eat like chicken,
pizza, and pork rice soup. I love eating and eating is the most joy in
my life. Secondly, when my mom gives me a hug, I feel happy because I
love my mom. Lastly, playing computer game also makes me happy because
it is very fun.
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