What makes me happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
when I see something new, I am happy. For example, to travel in other counties, to study new subject in my second university,
to meet a new person, etc.
Something new makes me exciting. So I try to challenge from a daily life every times.
Because I want to be clever and smart in my life.
Life is only once in my mind.
강사 첨삭
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Life is only once in my mind.
~Teacher Sheila
when I see something new, I am happy.
>>When I see something new, I am happy.
OR>>When I see something new, it makes me happy.
For example, to travel in other counties, to study new subject in my second university,
to meet a new person, etc.
to meet a new person, etc.
>>For example, to travel in other countries, to study new subjects in my second university, and to meet a new person, etc.
OR>>For example, traveling in other countries, studying a new subject in my second university, and meeting new people, etc.
Something new makes me exciting.
>>Something new makes me excited.
So I try to challenge from a daily life every times.
>>So, I am always challenged from my daily life experiences.
OR>>So, I always try to challenge myself from my daily life experiences.
Because I want to be clever and smart in my life.
Because I want to be clever and smart in my life.
>>CORRECT
Life is only once in my mind.
>>Life is precious in my mind.
OR>>I put in my mind that we have only one life.
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