What makes people give up on dieting or exercising?
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people give up diet since they have some alcohol with their friends. It is high calories in the foods that they eat while drinking.
And the main reason is that they don\'t like exercising.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for doing your homework!
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Here are some notes to remember:
1. Some people give up diet since they have some alcohol with their friends.
>>Some people give up diet since they are instead influenced to have alcohol with their friends.
2. It is high calories in the foods that they eat while drinking.
>>The foods that they eat while drinking are high in calories.
3. And the main reason is that they don\'t like exercising.
3. And the main reason is that they don\'t like exercising.
>>The main reason is that they don\'t like exercising.
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