What makes someone beautiful?
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It seems that people have their own criterion when they think of someone as beautiful one. There are many factors which make someone beautiful. For some people, a really beautiful appearance is the main reason when they think of someone as beeautiful one. For others, good body shape can be the reason.
In my case, eautiful mind is the most important factor when I regard someone as attractive person. Even though someone is not charming, if she cares about other people, I think that most people consider her as beautiful person. Thus, I am sure that beautiful mind makes someone attractive.
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Good morning miss [이름]!
I like your definition of beauty. It is not all about the physical appearance. A person\'s character and good heart makes her beautiful.^^ Stay beautiful inside out Miss [이름]!^^
~Kelly^^
It seems that people have their own criterion when they think of someone as beautiful one.
>> It seems that people have their own criterion when they think of someone as beautiful.
There are many factors which make someone beautiful.
>> There are many factors which makes someone beautiful.
For some people, a really beautiful appearance is the main reason when they think of someone as beeautiful one.
>> For some people, they define beauty through physical appearance.
For others, good body shape can be the reason.
>> For others, having a good body shape is beautiful. In my case, eautiful mind is the most important factor when I regard someone as attractive person.
>> In my case, a beautiful mind is the most important factor when I regard someone as attractive.
Even though someone is not charming, if she cares about other people, I think that most people consider her as beautiful person.
>> Even though someone is not charming, if she cares about other people, I think that most people will consider her as a beautiful person.
Thus, I am sure that beautiful mind makes someone attractive.
>> Thus, I am sure that a beautiful mind makes someone attractive.
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