What makes someone beautiful in your country?

Hi Kim!

Thank you for sharing your insight about beauty. I totally agree that with your opinion that inner beauty is far more important than external beauty.

~Kelly^^

There are many things that make someone beautiful in my country.

>> Correct.
External beauty is simple.

>> Correct.

it\'s just made by good looking and shape. 

>> It\'s about being good looking and having a nice body shape.
But Inner beauty is really important.
>> Correct.

>> or: But, inner beauty is more important.

I think honest, kindness, and bright smile make someone beautiful.

>> I think honesty, kindness, and bright smile make someone beautiful.

when people do right things with honest mind, they look beautiful and make better world.

>> When people do right things with an honest mind, they look beautiful and that makes our world a better place to live in.

and Nowadays. people are indifferent each other.

>> And nowadays, people are indifferent each other.

So when someone is in bad situation or emergency, people just pass by and ignore it.

>> So, when someone is in a bad situation or an emergency situation, people just pass by and ignore him.

but I think someome who has inner beauty will help them. 

>> But, I think someone with an inner beauty will help him. 

And bright smile make anyone beautiful and also change the atmosphere anywhere anytime.
>> And a bright smile makes anyone beautiful and also changes the atmosphere anywhere, anytime. 
people should think that inner beauty is more important than external beauty.

>> People should think that inner beauty is more important than external beauty.

Good person who has a inner beauty make better world not a good looking person.

>> Only a good person who has inner beauty makes the world a better place to live in.