What makes someone beautiful in your country? What differs between that idea and the American idea o
학생이 쓴 원문
I think in my country the way how a person treated is make that person beautiful. For example, let\'s say that someone treat you kindly and friendly, and then that person\'s mind will kind of change and have a mind to be kind and friendly to another person. And I am not interesting about how Americans think about this. So that I can\'t anwser for this question. Bye~Bye~ See u tomorrow.^^
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ella! I was having a hard time understanding your homework today. It would have been better if you made precise sentences.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>I think in my country, the way how a person treats others in a good way makes that person beautiful.
For example, let\'s say that someone treat you kindly and friendly, and then that person\'s mind will kind of change and have a mind to be kind and friendly to another person.
>>For example, let\'s say that someone treated you kindly and friendly and you will also change your mind to treat another person in a kind and friendly way as well.
And I am not interesting about how Americans think about this. So that I can\'t anwser for this question.
>>And I am not interested about how Americans think about this.
So that I can\'t anwser for this question.
>>So, I can\'t answer this question.
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