What makes something special?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that mind makes something special. When I accept something, my attitude is changed. Before it was not special, now it is aspecial.
When I started to learn English, English become special for me. Before English was just foreign langague, now it become a my goal. I open watch youtube, I subscribe English contents. When I heard word that I didn\'t know it\'s mean, I just serch dictionary. I think that to learn English very fun, but to make sentence in English very hard. I will study more hard for improve my English level.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [Name]!
That is true. It is we who make something special. A simple stone may be special to someone, but not to everybody.
It is how we accept and visualize things and people should not judge another person because of it.
Aki~
I think that mind makes something special.
>>> I think that the mind makes something special.
When I accept something, my attitude is changed.
>>> When I accept something, my attitude changes.
Before it was not special, now it is aspecial.
>>> It used to be not special.
When I started to learn English, English become special for me.
>>> When I started learning English, it became special to me.
Before English was just foreign langague, now it become a my goal.
>>> Before, English was just a foreign language; now it has become my goal.
I open watch youtube, I subscribe English contents.
>>> I often watch YouTube and subscribe to English content.
When I heard word that I didn\'t know it\'s mean, I just serch dictionary.
>>> Whenever I hear a word that I don\'t know it\'s meaning, I just look it up in the dictionary.
I think that to learn English very fun, but to make sentence in English very hard.
>>> I think that to learn English is very fun, but making sentences in English is very hard.
I will study more hard for improve my English level.
>>> I will study harder to improve my English level.
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