What makes the Lunar New year special? (in 3-4 sentences)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this wonderful composition, [이름]!
Family bonding is a very special thing to have. ^^
I hope you have a great Lunar New Year! ^^
The words \"Taken for granted\" means you take advantage of a person\'s kindness, or a certain situation, for your own good.
So I will try to change that in your composition, okay?
See you in class! ^^
~~t. Ally
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Getting together makes the Lunar New year special.
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Some people take it for granted that they gratefully drive for up to seven hours to go over to their parents, relatives and friends.
>> Some people choose to cherish that day and gratefully drive for up to 7 hours just to come over to where their parents, relatives and friends are.
They play traditional games, share special foods and some of them wear Hanbok - the traditional Korean clothes.
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While they share good old memories and make new memories during the holiday, people in the metropolitan city travel overseas.
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