What makes the Lunar New year special? (in 3-4 sentences)

2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What makes the Lunar New year special? (in 3-4 sentences) Getting together makes the Lunar New year special. Some people take it for granted that they gratefully drive for up to seven hours to go over to their parents, relatives and friends. They play traditional games, share special foods and some of them wear Hanbok - the traditional Korean clothes. While they share good old memories and make new memories during the holiday, people in the metropolitan city travel overseas.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this wonderful composition, [이름]!


Family bonding is a very special thing to have. ^^

I hope you have a great Lunar New Year! ^^

The words \"Taken for granted\" means you take advantage of a person\'s kindness, or a certain situation, for your own good.

So I will try to change that in your composition, okay?

See you in class! ^^



~~t. Ally



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Getting together makes the Lunar New year special.

>> CORRECT!


 Some people take it for granted that they gratefully drive for up to seven hours to go over to their parents, relatives and friends.

>> Some people choose to cherish that day and gratefully drive for up to 7 hours just to come over to where their parents, relatives and friends are.


 They play traditional games, share special foods and some of them wear Hanbok - the traditional Korean clothes.

>> CORRECT!


 While they share good old memories and make new memories during the holiday, people in the metropolitan city travel overseas.

>> CORRECT!

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