What makes you angry?
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Dear [Name],
When I watch the news on TV, I feel very angry sometimes. I think, many people feel like this angry with unfair situation.
For example, alcoholic drive, Trump\'s SNS, Old people death due to Covid19 and so on.
When I complained about this, my wife said \" it is non your business.\"
I think, Her\'s thinking is right. but, Human is a social animal and we can decide which is correct or not.
So, if it is a unfair problem, most of people think as a fault about that decision.
For my relax, I close my eyes and erase my thinking from brain and sleep.
20 years ago, I have been to USA for training. I could not obtain the news about Korea. So I never get a angry there.
So, I do not watch the news on TV. that is my method not to avoid being angry.
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Here are your corrections:
Dear [Name],
When I watch the news on TV, I feel very angry sometimes.
>> CORRECT
I think, many people feel like this angry with unfair situation.
>> I think many people feel angry because of the unfair situation.
For example, alcoholic drive, Trump\'s SNS, Old people death due to Covid19 and so on.
>> For example, driving while drunk, Trump\'s SNS, old people dying due to Covid19 and so on.
>> CORRECT
>> the spelling of none
>> I think she\'s right, but humans are social animals and we can decide what is right from wrong.
>> So, if it\'s an unfair problem, most of the people think about the negative outcome of that decision.
>> For me to relax, I close my eyes and clear my thought then sleep.
>> About 20 years ago, I went to the USA for training.
I could not obtain the news about Korea. So I never get a angry there.
>> I can\'t obtain any news about Korea so I never got angry at that time.
>> So, I do not watch the news on T.V to avoid becoming angry.
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