What makes you angry and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Obviously, the thing that makes me angry is to be late for any appointment. I believe it\'s the smallest consideration for other people. Also that comes with a solid bond between each other. Of course, I can understand if you have a reason why you\'re late for meeting with me such as rush hours, unforeseen accidents and etc.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Elic! Keep the smile on your face because today is a bright day with another opportunity to learn more and to improve your English communication skills. You did great today. Thank you for participating well in class. See you again tomorrow.
Obviously, the thing that makes me angry is to be late for any appointment.
>> Obviously, the thing that makes me angry is being late for any appointment.
I believe it\'s the smallest consideration for other people.
>> I believe being late is inconsiderable for other people.
Of course, I can understand if you have a reason why you\'re late for meeting with me such as rush hours, unforeseen accidents and etc.
>> I can understand if you have a valid reason for being late such as traffic, unforeseen situation, and etc.
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